What People Are Saying

“Paddy has helped me fix up two plays recently - he's a joy to work with and gave me loads of support, advice and encouragement to develop both scripts. He reads with great sensitivity and insight and has deep knowledge of how to craft a compelling story; his detailed and perceptive feedback was a gift when I was in the process of redrafting my shows.”

— Claire

“Paddy's notes on my script were incredibly insightful, constructive and helpful. He really took time to think about my script and engage with its characters and themes. This has helped me a lot in approaching my redraft. I would love to work with him again in the future!.”

— Alex

“I Had a dramaturgy session on one of my plays with Paddy yesterday and I cannot recommend him enough. Incredibly insightful, supportive and actionable feedback. Rather than just giving solutions it felt like he was opening windows for the right edits to pour in and find me”

.— Laurie

“Paddy's approach to our dramaturgy sessions was methodical and inspiring in a way that enabled me to move forward with agency and confidence. It was such a positive and supportive way to tackle a rewrite that I had felt really stuck with. I highly recommend him.”

.— Ginny

Paddy's feedback was incisive and insightful and really got under the skin of my idea and characters. His enthusiasm for reading the script was palpable and really motivating for me.

.— Anon

“The sessions with Paddy are so helpful. He's smart, insightful and generous. I always come off my Zoom sessions with him excited and eager to get back to my play. That's a very good sign!”

— Kathy

“Paddy helped me with two drafts of a new play, and his advice and encouragement was invaluable. I would absolutely love to work with him again, and would recommend him to anyone stuck on a tricky draft of a script who is looking for an outside perspective.”

— Caitlin

“I went from a blank page to a full play under the guidance of Paddy....he provided me with regular support, constructive feedback and most importantly he challenged me with realistic deadlines to work toward...he never let me lose confidence in my ideas...he always wants you to write the best play possible...work with him if you can.”

— Saphena

“Paddy spent the time not just getting to know my script, but also connecting with me on a personal level to understand the context of my play. He is incredibly personable and a joy to work with, and his expertise and insights on my draft have given me clarity on what it will take to bring my play from script to stage. This experience has given me extra motivation to move forward with my writing!

— Corey

“Paddy has enabled me to take my play to the next level over two rounds of draft feedback. He's an absolute joy to work with and has been a great guide with both overarching challenges like character transformation and more specific challenges in scene-by-scene breakdowns. His notes are clear and considered, and without him, my play would not be in the position it is today. I will definitely be working with him again and would strongly recommend any writers who want fresh, expert eyes on their story to get in touch with him!”

.— Dan